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I'm not strong enough for this hurt
Is it so wrong of me to say
This trouble is more than it's worth
But I want you anyway
My heart had a wall
Stupid me, I let it fall
I though you were someone
I could trust with it all
So now I cry myself to sleep
The effect of my own actions
The cliff I'm standing on is steep
And the edge is crumbling by fractions
But not to worry
I've been here before
Crank on the music
Lock the door
My mind will find solace
In beats that shake
If I turn up the chorus
I can't hear my heart break
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More of my typical unrequited love and all that jazz.
This one really does give a glimpse of how I handle matters of the heart. If I can't hear my heart I can't feel the hurt.
I know that's not true but don't tell me that.
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~Axilery Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*sighs*

That's the way it's been.
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Mood: Sadness ~Camilo101 Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautifully sad poem. This is how I'm feeling right now...and may be for a very long time.
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~Tayla19 Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dont worry, i do the same thing
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Mood: Sadness ~Notyrgrl Jul 2, 2012  Student Writer
sad.
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:iconlieofathousandtruths:
This struck a chord in me--describes exactly how I feel.
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Mood: Sadness ~DeathbatHeartagram Apr 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It sucks to feel this way...
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:iconflowersanddreams:
It's good you can find something to keep your mind off it, if just for a while...
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:iconone-rosy-cheek:
Wow the rhythm is awesome, and the ending is beautiful
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~WanderingChild96 Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly how I feel right now. Unrequited love sure sucks.
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Mood: Sadness ~RavenclawRadiance Sep 24, 2011  Student Interface Designer
I love the last four lines. Enough said.
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